DAILY RUTINE
He wakes up at 5:00 am and later gets up at 5:30 am, then he takes a shower at 5:35 am and inmediatly gets dressed, after that, at 5:50 am he's ready to takes his breakfast and at 6:15 am goes to the work. He arrives to the work at 7:00 am after a long trip in the bus, and work until 5:00 pm with a lunch time from 12:00 pm until 1:30 pm. When he finishes the work, arrives at home at 6:00 pm and plays guitar at 6:20 pm, his favorite hooby and after all and he's tired, takes his dinner at 8:00 pm and when finishes he washes the dishes, later watch TV around a half hour and finally goes to sleep at 9:00 pm to finish a long day.
Cristy says: This is very good work. The spelling and grammar is very good.
ResponderEliminarYou could try to link the sentences together to make the reading flow a little better. Try this, for example;
"He wakes up at 5.00am and by 5.50am he has had his shower and is ready for breakfast at 5.50 am".